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高考书信作文范文篇一:高考英语书信模板范文

高考书面表达是同学们和老师们非常头疼的一道题目,不想多花费时间,认为效果不好,根据近几年全国卷书面表达的情况来看,还是可以好好总结积累一些模版和模型供我们使用参考的。希望同学们多多背诵这次模型模版文章,2017年高考书面表达考出20分以上的好成绩!

申请信

【写作要求一】

假定你是李华,从互联网((the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。

内容主要包括:1. 自我介绍(包括英语能力);2. 参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);3. 希望获准。

注意:1. 数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好.

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.

I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.

Looking forward to your reply!

Yours

Li Hua

【写作要求二】

假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一些优秀学生,利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示,用英语给校评选组写一封申请信:

1. 对此活动的认识(如对本人、学生及社会的益处等)

2. 个人优势(如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等)

3. 你的计划(如怎样进行辅导等)

注意:1. 词数不少于100;

2. 可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;

3. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数。

参考词汇:晨曦希望小学Chenxi Hope School

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. As far as I am concerned, I believe to teach English for pupils from Chen Xi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutor, which thus will result in substantial social benefits.

I think I am qualified for being the pupils’ English coach, because I have good character, being independent in life and proficient in English. That’s why I apply for the position; I hope I can join the instructive activity.

My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing. What’s more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language, creating a good learning environment. I hope you can offer the opportunity.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

建议信

【写作要求】

假定你是李华,你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见.请你依据以下内容给主编写封信,内容主要包括: 1.说明你是该报的忠实读者

2.赞赏该报优点:1)兼顾国内外新闻 2)介绍名人成功故事

3.提出建议:刊登指导英语学习的文章

注意:1.词数100左右,开头语己为你写好;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Editor-in-Chief,

Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!

I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it so much that I hardly miss any copy.

There are many advantages of Global Mirror. Firstly, Global Mirror covers both national and international news. By simply turning the pages, I can know all important things that have happened both home and abroad. Besides, the success stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, which help me learn a lot from them. In a word, thanks to Global Mirror, we are well-informed and keep up with the changing world.

As a young student, I wish that I can be a master of English language. Therefore, I suggest that Global Mirror provide articles about English learning for us.

Finally, I hope that Global Mirror will become more and more popular. Thank you for your time!

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

求助信

【写作要求】

假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛 (speech contest),你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件:

1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况;

2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙;

3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。

注意:

1.词数:120—150;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Tom,

How is it going these days? I keep wondering how you feel about your school life in Beijing. Have you got used to the life in China? Are you enjoying your life? I hope you are.

Let me tell you a piece of good news: I’m going to take part in an English speech contest of middle school students in July in the coming summer vacation. So I’m busy preparing for it. But now I have some difficulty in collecting useful information and using proper English word to express my thoughts. Besides, I really want to improve my spoken English, especially the

pronunciation and intonation(语调). Of course, as a native English speaker, you can give me some suggestions.

In addition, I’m going to visit you after the contest. I’m sure we will have a wonderful time together in Beijing! I can hardly wait to see you! I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours,

Li Hua

感谢信

【写作要求】

假定你是李华,你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里,你们的英文老师是来自这所中学的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美国任教。请你根据写作要点和要求给Sue写封电子邮件。

写作要点:1.对她表达感谢之意;(议论)

2.介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情; (记叙)

3.希望了解她的近况。(询问)

要求:1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。

2.短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。

3.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯;

4.书写须清晰、工整。

5.邮件中不能体现本人真实信息。

【优秀满分范文一】

Dear Sue,

I’m Li Hua, one of your students in China. It’s almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.

We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood?

How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch.

All the best.

Yours

Li Hua

【优秀满分范文二】

Dear Sue,

How are you doing?

I am writing this letter to say "thank you." First and foremost, it is clear that you, just like "our foreign mother", were very patient to us. Additionally, needless to say, you taught me a lot, not only English knowledge but also your life wisdom;consequently, all of us have fallen in love with English and study. Last but certainly not least, there is no doubt that we had a great time together, which we will keep in mind forever.

By the way, I can't wait to tell you something new about my class. After you left for the America, we had an English competition. We all did very well, using the knowledge you told us. No one can deny you helped us so much!

Sue, can you give me some information about your life in America? I miss you so much. I am looking forward to your early reply!

Best wishes!

Yours love /truly,

Li Hua

邀请信

【写作要求一】

假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华, 你校举办关于“人与自然”的英语演讲比赛, 邀请Ms. Smith做评委。请参照以下内容给她写一封信.1. 时间:6月15日下午 2:00-5:00

2. 参赛选手:10名学生3. 联系人:李华(电话 123456)

注意:词数100左右; 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Ms. Smith,

I'm Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your university. I'm writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic "Man and Nature". It’s my honor if you can accept our invitation. Please call me at 123456 if you have any question.

I am looking forward to your reply. With best wishes.

Yours

Li Hua

【写作要求二】

高考书信作文范文篇二:(用)高考真题作文信件类范文(粘贴版)

全国大纲卷(2012邀请信,小明生日party)满分作文 It’s our great honour to invite you to the party. I do hope you can come and join us from the bottom of my heart if it is convenient to you. This Friday evening, the party will take place for Xiaoming from 8 p.m to 9 p.m at the students’ club. Now that it is a surprise , everybody is required to give a little present for him. The moment he gets there, we will sing

“Happy Birthday” to him with the candles on, cut the birthday cake prepared for him in advance and share it together. What’s more, we can enjoy ourselves by singing songs and playing games. We can’t wait to see how excited he will be. Hope you can have a wonderful time at the party, too.

全国卷1(邀请信,英语演讲比赛)8 满分作文个人总结 I’m honored to write to invite you to our English Speech Contest (be / feel honored to do sth做某事感到荣幸,非常得体). I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union of Yucai High School. [ I’m honored to write to invite you to our

English Speech Contest on behalf of (代表某人)our school --- Yucai High School.]

We will hold this contest, of which the topic (高中阶段较难掌握的语法知识) is Human and Nature to appeal to students to protect our environment (appeal to sb to do sth呼吁某人做某事). [ We will hold this contest –Human and Nature with the purpose of raising the students’ awareness of environment protection (with the purpose of 以…为目的).] Considering (conj,考虑到,鉴于)you are a native speaker of English, we would like you to be our judge and make some comments and give some valuable advice.

I would appreciate it if you could accept our invitation (此类动词还有love, hate等). The contest will be on from 2:00 to 5:00 on June 15th in Room 501. There are ten

competitors in all. Please call me at 4487665 if you have any question. Looking forward to your reply soon. 天津卷高考真题(2012邀请信,看话剧演出)

There will be a traditional Chinese Shaoxing Opera, the name of which is Butterfly Lovers, in Tianjin Grand Theatre, a nice newly-built theatre, at two o’clock on the afternoon of August 5. Isn’t Chinese culture familiar to you ? {Now that you are familiar with Chinese culture,} Therefore, it is I who sincerely invite you to watch it. What’s more, after that, I make a suggestion that a visit should be paid to the nearby museum or the gallery or other places, where, I think, you can learn more about Chinese culture. How I wish you could accept my invitation! If so, we do enjoy ourselves.

Looking forward to your reply.

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全国新课标卷申请信(2012)满分作文个人总结: Dear Sir or Madam,

Learning your summer camp to be held from the Internet in Singapore and stuents from differnet countries to be welcome, I , Li Hua, a middle school student from China, do be eager to participate in it. Having been learning English for a decade(比ten years高级), I can speak it fluently and accurately. [ I’m so keen on English that I desire that by joining in the camp I can communicate with students from different countries.] As is known to us all, communication is of great importance. Not only can I

introduce China to them, but also I can know more about their counties as well. Could you please accept me as a member of your summer camp? [ I do hope that I’ll be accepted as a member of your summer camp.]

Looking forward to your reply.Regards Li Hua 辽宁卷(提纲要点类)5 满分作文个人总结

Without doubt, [ It is obvious that ] the life in the college is quite different from that in the high school.

As far as I’m concerned, life without goals is like a ship without a sail(比喻手法形象生动). I’d like to set a series of(回避常用a lot of) new goals(习惯地道表达) to better(地道) spend my college life, and on top of that, I need to improve my way of learning. Secondly, with parents and friends away, [ without the protection and care of parents,] I must adapt to(代替get used to更加新颖) the new life and learn to solve the problems on my own(比by myself高级). Finally, it’s because learning means acquiring knowledge from practice as well as books that I will make the best of [ take

advantage of ] my spare time to participate in various activities. Meanwhile, I will spare no effort to get on with others.[ I will also do what / everything / all I can to get on with others.] In all(使文章更紧凑), no matter what happens at college, I will face all the happiness and sorrow with a positive attitude.[ With all these arrangements and my hard work(作状语,简化句子结构,突出表现力), I am sure my college life will be colorful(富有诗意) and hopeful.] 湖北卷(投诉信)6 满分作文个人总结

What I want to say is that there is something wrong with my mobile phone.(what引导的名词性从句属于较复杂的语法结构,比直接使用There is something wrong with my mobile phone.表达准确严谨,富有内涵。) To begin with, it didn’t ring. What’s more(过渡词使用贴切), it couldn’t be used to send short messages. Consequently(这是用词方面的一个亮点,还可用as a result), I had to go to the mall where I bought it for a change. However(表转折关系的过渡词使用恰当), it’s because the model had been sold out that they couldn’t change it for me. Later, I went to have it repaired. Nevertheless, such a new type of mobile phone was this that it couldn’t be

repaired because of there being no spare parts.

Taking into account all these factors above(考虑到以上因素,用于对上文作小结,接下来是做出的决定), I require / request your company should change it for me as soon as possible.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours sincerely, Li Hua

辽宁卷(求职信)7 满分作文个人总结

I’m dying for the job and I think I am quite fit for it.[ I’m writing in the hope that you will be able to offer me the job and I feel I’m competent(有能力的,能胜任的)to it.] [ I’m really interested in this position and hope I can work for you.] (开门见山说出自己的想法,对自己充满信心)

I, a 20-year-old boy, who will graduate from Xinxing

Foreign Language School this July, have excellent performance at school. I have a good knowledge of spoken and written English, which will meet your demands(补充信息,丰富了句式结构).[ Having a good command of English, including(介词,included,adj只放在名词后) written and spoken English,] I always make my grades remain upper level in our department. Besides, in my spare time, making friends and participating in various activities turn me into an easygoing(脾气随和的,温和的)and warm-hearted man. In addition (besides和in addition表示递进关系,承上启下,使内容叙述很流畅),I am experienced in operating computers and I type very fast. Getting along with me, you will feel my optimism and

enthusiasm。If given the chance, I will make every effort to do it well. [ Trust me and you will be rewarded.]

Looking forward to your reply. Li Hua

天津卷 (高考真题—发言稿)3 满分作文个人总结

Holding this activity has become a tradition, through which we can improve our abilities both in speaking and listening, and on top of that(除了), to help us form the good habit of reading is also our aim, thus improving our integration capability (综合能力).

Ok (以口语化ok表达作为段落过渡,自然新颖), here is something you must pay attention to. What’s the most important is that you are required to use fluent English and pronounce every word correctly. What’s more, you must limit your speech to 5 minutes. Last but not least, you’d better make yourself at home (不必拘束,使用贴切)during this competition.

Try your best, and I’m looking forward to your

outstanding performance. Wish this competition to succeed. [ At last, I hope, with your hard work and enthusiasm, this competition will be a great success.

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江西卷(演讲稿)1满分作文个人总结

With the improvement of our living standard, an

increasing number of people (growing people) buy cars for the convenience of travel. We can now drive to work, to do shopping, to visit friends and even to travel across the

country(增补细节,使语意更加丰富). Convenient as they are, cars also go hand in hand with air pollution as well as traffic jams(词汇量丰富,表达方式生动形象,增加文章的可续性). [That, however, contributes to some other burning(紧急的,极重要的)problems, such as…]

Then (用then引导句子承上启下) what should we do when faced with (简洁有力) the unfavorable (不好的,不利的) situation? [How to solve the problems is a great challenge to everyone(承上启下)?] My suggestion is that we should ride bicycles rather than drive cars. Undoubtedly(引出观点更有力), there are an army of benefits.[There is no doubt that riding bicycles can surely do us good.] Firstly, riding bicycles means living a low-carbon life, which is both popular and energy-saving(有效地补充信息,使句意完整). Secondly, riding bicycles more and driving cars less can contribute to less air pollution, thus (thus引导v-ing表结果,高级表达) doing good to our health.

It is by riding bicycles that we can solve the

above-mentioned trouble. Now that / seeing that/ considering that there lies so many advantages, why not join us and ride bicycles?

生词:hand in hand总是同时发生的。如:Dirt and disease go hand in hand.肮脏与疾病关系密切。

Thus的用法:The new machines will work faster, thus reducing our costs.新机器运转的速度会更快,可以减低成本。

高考书信作文范文篇三:书信体高考满分作文

书信体高考满分作文

书信的种类很多,常见的有一般书信和专用书信两种,话题作文常采用一般书信,因为一般书信的应用范围极其广泛,如政治、学术、文艺、家务、世俗、人情世故等各方面。所以书信可以议论,可以抒情,可以描写,可以叙事。它的针对性强,形式灵活。

此外,书信还有固定的格式;称呼、问候、正文、结尾语、具名、日期。它的语言要简明,口语化,还要考虑收信人的身份、经历、文化水平等方面的特点等。

仰望星空与脚踏实地

——致墨子的一封信

尊敬的墨子:

这是两千年后的一个学生写给你的信。我不知缘何想要写信给你,只知道我因你而懂得了一个简单却又深邃的道理:仰望星空也要脚踏实地。

记得小时候,我无意间从书架的最底层摸到一本古朴的线装书,这便是我与你的第一次?邂逅?。但这第一次似乎并不大美妙,因为从你那黝黑的脸上我看不到一点情感,只有?守不竟,即赴死?的严苛与冷酷。 那时我觉得,你一定不是个有远大理想的人,一定不是个会仰望星空的人。

但终究,我没有放下这本书,而是日益被它吸引。?天下之人皆相爱,则强不执弱,众不劫寡?——书中的每一个字都散发着一股奇特的稻香。于是每每书页翻动,我便仿佛回到那个人人?交相亏贼?的纷繁乱世。

苍茫中,我看到了那塞外骑着青牛缓缓西去的老者,望天吟咏?功遂身退,天之道?;也望见那杏坛上侃侃而谈的翩翩君子,仰天大呼?天何言哉?天何言哉?;我看到了临淄稷下学宫中百家争鸣的一派繁荣,也见到了楚河上鼓盆而歌的隐士,正陶醉地?独与天地精神往来?。

终于,我一眼望到了你。你并未选择归隐,也不愿去与诸子整日无谓地论战。你只是奔波在华夏大地上,以行者的姿态现于人间,奔走疾呼,救百姓于水火,解万民之忧苦。?尽天下之卵,其石犹是也?,你是如此脚踏实地,你的脚步是如此坚实、不屈。

我终于明白,你并非不会仰望星空,你的繁星是?天下大同?。只是比起那些只知仰望星空,只能制造苍白无力的口号的其余诸子,你宁愿脚踏实地地践行自己的理想,让?兼爱?——你的这片星空划出更绚烂的光芒。所以,你总在不停地奔忙。你曾不远千里游说楚王,并?九拒鲁班攻城之机变?,拯救宋国一方百姓;你又四处奔波,?非攻??非乐??非命??非儒?,为的就是切实地为这乱世提出真正的?济世良方?。你仰望星空,又总是不忘脚踏实地。因而你的脚步从不停息,你的足迹遍布神州大地。而在这浮夸虚假仍存于世的两千年后,你的脚步也越发显得坚实、有力。

原来,你的双眼永远仰望着星空;原来,你的双脚从未离开过大地!

黑衣黑发、黑眼黑面,眼望星空,脚踏大地,奔走于大地上的你,就像一道黑色的闪电,划破天际,穿透重霄,为这九州五岳点燃永不熄灭的火焰!

人类需要仰望星空,因为没有星空的照耀,我们的路不会有前方。但是,在仰望星空的时候,也不能忘了脚踏实地,为他人为社会切实地做点什么。毕竟,星空的美丽永远不属于大地,只有我们脚踏实地,才可以用自己的每一个脚印折射出星空的绚丽。

墨子,感谢你,让我明白了这简单却又深邃的道理,也感谢你让我的生命拥有了最恒久的动力。

专家组评分: 标卷作文一(一类文上) 内容20分表达20分 发展20分总分60分

注:这是一篇较为传统的?旧文化作文?,但同时也是一篇?新文化作文?:从谭蘅君老师关于文化作文的概念来判断,一它具有雅语的特征,是经过雅语训练,并能优美表达的作文。二是不管它运用什么材料,古代也罢,当代也罢,材料只是一种载体或手段,关键是文章里有没有文化精神与文化情怀。从以上两个方面,我们确认:这也是一篇新?文化作文?。

我的青春我做主

——致野鸭教练的一封信

亲爱的教练:

您好,我是您的学生兔子。

当你看到这封信时,我已经离开了培训班,请原谅我的不辞而别。感谢您这段时间对我的精心指导,在这里我想向您说说我的心里话。

我知道自己游泳很差,上次差点因此丧命,所以当管理局人员通知我去培训班时,我很开心地答应了。我相信?只要功夫深,铁杵磨成针?,于是,每天拼命地练习。可是一段时间下来,我发现自己的兴趣完全不在这里,我发现所有的努力都是徒劳。想了又想,我决定自己做一回主——放弃游泳,重拾短跑。

您曾经说过:?成功的90%来自于汗水。?我不否认,但付出汗水的前提是兴趣。您是游泳高手,因为您爱它,就像我爱短跑一样。只要让我跑,风吹、日晒、汗水、鲜血,我都会一笑而过。眼愈多流泪而愈见清明,心因饱经忧患而愈加温厚。我不怕苦,但我怕徒劳地付出。

尺有所短,寸有所长,谁也不是一无是处,更不是完美无缺。既然有特长,为什么不尽力发展它呢?前两天,青蛙大哥专门来找我说:?你擅长的是奔跑!为什么只是针对弱点训练而不发展特长呢??是啊,一招鲜,吃遍天,您不正是靠着游泳的特长才找到这份好工作的么?

生活的本领不止一样,但我们谁也无法做一个全才,谁也不会事事如愿。在有能力的条件下,我会尽量多学几种本领,打洞、跳高、长跑……学无止境,我会不断自我提升的。但我不会强迫自己,喜欢什么就学什么,这样的人生才快乐嘛!

您对我的帮助都记在心里,但我仍想说:?我的青春我做主。前人的经验只能是一种借鉴,而不能成为我的人生模型。

青春的无暇与无邪,就在于它的一去不返,可遇而不可求。没有你们的导航,我依然可以不埋葬向往;没有你们的牵引,我依然可以不迷失方向。

短跑是我的灵魂,我一定会加倍努力的,我相信我的实力。希望在下一届运动会上,可以看到你为我加油的身影,听到你说:?加油!呷呷!?

祝你工作顺利,天天开心!

您的学生:兔子

×年×月×日

父亲,我只是一只小小鸟!

河南一考生

亲爱的父亲:

坐在高考的考场上提笔给您写信,几多犹豫,几多彷徨。思虑再三,我还是决定以这样的方式向您倾诉我心中的感激与哀怨。

一则小小的寓言故事让我清晰地看到了自己的影子,生活中的我何尝不是那只无法学会游泳的兔子呢?是的,您给予了我太多,您付出的也太多,但您的要求也太多,您的标准也太高。在你那双期盼的双眼里,我感到的,不是力量,而是无穷无尽的压力。

您为什么要我去摘天上的月亮?!

父亲,我知道,在您的心中,您的儿子应该是最优秀的、最有才的。学习要好,爱好要广,别的孩子拥有的特长我也一定要有。所以从小到大,我不停地奔波在绘画班、书法班、武术班、舞蹈班、奥数班、英语班……也许您心里有自己的一杆秤,也有您的参照标准,但是,您的砝码太大,您的参照标准太高了!从小学到现在,我总是在您的牵扯下马不停蹄地?全面发展着?。可惜,我只是一个普通的孩子,对,一个非常普通的孩子,我无法按照您的设计完成那些对于我来说?难于上青天?的事情。我做的每一件事,已经是费尽气力,用尽心血,可结果总是不尽如人意。于是您总是不满意,总是失望。

父亲,我感谢您十几年来给予我的帮助,然而,我的人生之路毕竟应该由我来决定,您给我设定的发展?程序?并不适合我啊!

父亲,?十个指头伸出来有长也有短?,我不是一个智商超群的人,奥数比赛总是失败,唱歌总是跑调,而且学习也不是很好,做人也有失败之处,但我还是我。也许您看到这里,会十分生气,但是,父亲,您能否降低你的?培养标准?,来仔仔细细地看我呢?

我学不好奥数,但我对电脑却有天赋;我唱歌跑调,但我却写得一手好字;我不会种花,但我养的金鱼十分活泼;我学习不是很好,但我有诚实的品质和健康的身体……

父亲,我拥有很多,我失去的也很多。您知道吗?我只是一只小小鸟,一只能在空中飞翔的小小鸟。如果你想让我像海豚一样在大海里游泳,等待我的恐怕只有死神;如果您想让我在草原上像野马一样奔跑,等待我的恐怕只能是悲剧。

父亲,我只是一只小小鸟,飞翔才是我的特长,难道您就没有想过吗?如果您能帮助我不断磨砺翅膀,也许我会飞得更高更远,天空才是我一生的追求啊!

父亲,请您从您的心里的秤上,轻轻拿下一些砝码,或者不要让我去摘月亮,让我为你摘个桃子吧,当您吃到甜甜的桃子,您就不会为我没有摘到月亮而生气了。

父亲,我只是一只小小鸟!

此致

敬礼!

您的儿子

2009年6月7日

满分揭秘

可怜天下父母心,在成长的道路上,父母总是想让孩子掌握更多的特长,然而却又忽略了孩子的个性需要,因此父母与子女之间产生矛盾也就不可避免。尊重孩子,尊重规律,科学发展,才是正确的发展之路。这个道理怎样讲才会深刻呢?作者采用书信形式真情表白,深深地打动了阅卷者。

考场绝招

构思新颖,情感真挚。文章采用书信形式表达,构思新颖,情感表达也显得真挚自然。文章开头从寓言故事自然地引出自己的感受,然后在精细的叙述中逐步表达自己对父亲的感激与哀怨。通过对一件件生活、学习的事件的倾诉,表现了自己对?发展特长?的理解。那就是发展特长也应该考虑孩子的自身条件,不应该违背规律盲目地强加给孩子。

语言流畅自然,文采斐然。句式富于变化,丰富多彩,比喻、反复等修辞手法的运用增强了文章的文采,很好地传达了作者的情感。(任维东) 一步与一生

四川考生

亲爱的孩子:

妈妈今天高兴极了,因为你迈出了人生的第一步。

老早你就挥着手舞着脚想从妈妈的手心里下来,但你的双脚还不足以支撑那个摇晃不定的小身体。每次看你在我松手后沉重地跌倒,妈妈的心都会跟着跌一跤。但现在是你克服困难战胜自我的时候了。于是,我们拿你最爱的糖果在前方作引,?啊呀呀?,你放开了爸爸的手走出了第一步!

孩子,迈出这第一步后,你就开始了永不停息的征程。为此,妈妈要叮嘱你,纵使你的路狭窄崎岖,时而有形时而无形,你都不要忘了踏实走好每一步。

来,抬起你的左脚,走,一,这一步叫勇敢。正如你开始学走那样,毫无畏惧地向前走吧!当困难如荆棘长满你的小路,别怕,踩上去!当失望如黑夜笼罩你的天空,别怕,踏出去!当痛苦如针插在你的前方,别怕,跨过去!

接着,你的右脚,来,二,这一步叫自信。妈妈会每天都往你的小脑袋里装一些鼓励,你其实有好多好多信心,千万不要让它闷在瓶子里,它会窒息;千万不要拿它像宝物一样四处展览,它会学坏;千万不要随便听信别人的话,把它扔在一边,它会寂寞、会哭。它就像你爱的那颗糖果,会给你带来无限甜蜜,千万记着它!

好样的孩子,这两步你都走得很好,第三步可能会有些困难,它叫执著。不要轻易放弃你的梦想。孩子,很多时候我们会来到一片特殊的土地上,那里的土壤让我们的梦想不能萌发。孩子,别学他们,把梦想种在心里,而不是舆论上。每天给它浇水捉虫,它总会开花。

还有一步叫宽容。让你的伙伴玩你的玩具,让你的朋友直言对你的看法,让你的对手和你针锋相对,让你的思想里照进别人的思想。

还有很多步,你会慢慢明白,妈妈希望你一步步走过一生。不用追风,也不必追赶岁月。照妈妈教的,把左脚放在右脚前,然后把右脚放在左脚前。我们的民族几千年都采用这种走路方式,它名叫踏实。

孩子,每一步都很重要,它是你人生的一部分。妈妈今天看你走出了第一步,就明白小家伙已经知道?勇敢?怎么走了。妈妈真高兴。你就要去迎接生活的洗礼了,妈妈永远支持你!

孩子,走好每一步,就一定能走好一生!

爱你的妈妈

×年×月×日 来自天堂的一封信

亲爱的妈妈:

您还在哭吗?你的泪光都照到我这里来了。别哭了,妈妈。我并不孤单,这里有许多同学朋友。

妈妈,振作起来,你看胡主席和温总理正在夜以继日地指挥抗震救灾,十多万解放军、武警和公安干警叔叔正在拼命地挽救生命。蒋敏阿姨不也失去了女儿吗?但她是那么的坚强。妈妈,你要像她一样啊!把所有的孩子都当作自己的孩子,把给我的爱给她们吧。

妈妈,我好后悔没有听老师的话,谭千秋老师,吴忠红老师,他们总是在灾难来临的时候才表现出他们的爱。天堂的路太挤,我还没有找到他们。但我会一直找下去,直到对他们说出:老师,我爱你们。

妈妈,别担忧,我们一点都不怕,此刻我们真正担心的是你们啊。怕余震、山体滑坡伤到了解放军叔叔,怕病毒感染了护士阿姨,怕志愿者们累垮了。不过还好,在大家的齐心协力下,这种事情并不多。

妈妈,此刻的我心潮澎湃,想唱一首《中国心》给您听,只可惜您听不到了。日子平平淡淡的时候,总觉得国与国似乎都一样,人与人都相同,没一点刺激想奏出些波澜。现在波澜来了,却夺去了几万个鲜活的生命。我惊恐不安,但在泪光中,我却看到了一颗颗跳动的火热的心。妈妈啊,那就是中国心啊。

中国人民是最勇敢的,中国人是最具爱心的。这是我心底由衷的感叹!当我看到急行180里山路,51岁的四川军区副司令员李亚洲疲惫却坚强的面孔时;当我看到面对余震来临,荆利杰跪地哭求?让我再救一个?时;当我看到3岁孩童向救他的官兵举起仅能动的左手时,妈妈,你能体会我这一刻的心情吗?那感动,那震撼,那羞愧充盈着我的心。

地动天不塌,大灾有大爱!妈妈,这句话我懂了。我真的感觉到自己有一个强大的祖国!再震震不垮中国人民的信念,再摇摇不断民族的脊梁!妈妈,这种万众一心、众志成城,我感受到了!

妈妈,别再哭了,振作起来!我都已经擦干了眼泪,我来生要估一个老师,为孩子们缝补翅膀;我来生要做个警察,为人民营建和谐的家园;我来生要做一名医生,抚平人们的创伤……我来生要做一个对人民有益的人!妈妈,但请你记得我的模样,无论我来生做什么样的人,都是你的女儿。

不管你们在哪里,我都会找到你们,来生一起走!

已逝的女儿:XXX

X年X月X日

给人类的一封信

先生们/女士们:

晚上好,首先自我介绍一下,我是小鼠标标。来自穴居田鼠家族中的一员,奉族长之命,向那些长期奋战在捕蛇一线、暗杀猫头鹰、追打黄鼠狼、虐猫一族的朋友们表示衷心的感谢。是你们不懈的努力,拓展了我们的生存空间,使我们的安全得到保障,让我们从忍饥挨饿、提心吊胆的生活中解脱出来,过上了衣食无忧的小康生活,如今我们的家族日益壮大,广大农村已经被我们占领,到处活跃着我们兄弟姐妹们的身影。为了田鼠家族秋万代繁荣昌盛,我们需要开拓更广阔的天地,在这里我很高兴地告诉大家,我们准备从?农村包围城市?,走进现代化的大都市中,享受文明生活,创造一个和谐美满的老鼠社会。各位也看见了,我们正逐渐从黑暗走向光明的新生活,地球是属于我们的,你们人类靠边站去吧!

不要持怀疑态度,事实就摆在眼前。其一,我们鼠类的繁殖能力是很惊人的,而且没有计划生育,迟早有一天数量上要超过你们人类。其二,我们每一只老鼠都是具有超级杀伤力的细菌武器,我们随身携带几百种病原体,听说过鼠疫吗?那就是我们的类作。其三,我们鼠类具有敏锐的洞察力和高智商,人类老一套的捕鼠器和假耗子药根本吓不到我们。其四,我们鼠类是一个齐心协力、团结一致的群体,团结就是力量,这力量是铁是钢,可以无坚不摧。作为一名夜生活丰富的田鼠,我不得不对社会的发展感慷不已,以前我以为只有我们鼠类和我们的老对头们喜欢过这种暗无天日的生活,现在你们人类也过上了这种生活,其内容比我们要丰富多了。

千百年来,我们和人类进行斗智斗勇,经过长期的观察和考证,我们已经对人类种种恶习了如指掌,知己知彼才能百战不殆,我们共同的家园――地球,已经被你们人类折磨的遍体鳞伤,我们鼠类义愤填膺,人鼠大战既将上演。我们誓要将人类赶出地球。

作为一个有血有肉的动物,我和你们一样也有七情六欲,我们也有自己的梁祝传说,我正在和一只宠物波斯猫拍拖,有一天我在垃圾桶里听到有人在唱?我爱你,就像老鼠爱大米…………?感觉你们太伟大了,我们家族的千年秘密你们都知道!让我听的如痴如醉,以至于忘记了和波斯猫的约会,她大发脾气要甩了我,还好我及时想起族长说过?没有不吃腥的猫?,只好把好不容易弄到手的一只珍贵鱼头送给她,她才破涕为笑。

今晚的星星真亮啊!糟了,约会的时间到了。穴居太小就不邀请各位来我家作客了,各位如有邀我之意,不妨准备好美味佳肴我必如期依约前往。就写到这儿吧,去晚了波斯猫一生气没准又甩了我,像我这样没有名车别墅的无名小辈找个女朋友真的很不容易啊!有空再聊。拜拜!

另,回信放到垃圾桶即可。

和人类亲密接触的小鼠标标

鼠年鼠月鼠日

两封信

河南一考生

(一)第一封

沧海一声笑:

您好,心里很难受,所以提笔和你聊天。窗外阴霾的天空和我的心情一样,灰暗而又不着边际。

为什么失败的总是我。

我很勤奋,人人皆知。三更灯火五更明,头悬梁锥刺股的日子伴随着我走过花季。我是如此地热爱着绘画,一张张白纸在我的手下着色、变化,每一幅作品都蕴含着我的心血与汗水。可是?平庸、暗淡、苍白、平淡?这样的评价却一次次刺向我的心脏。难道我的生活里真的不该拥有绚烂的色彩?

我很执著,人人皆晓。二月杏花八月桂,顶星星戴月亮的岁月陪伴着我越过青春。我是那么喜爱音乐,一个个音符从我的嗓中飞出、飘荡,每一次演唱都浸透了我的情感与理想。然而?单薄、乏味、呆板、杂乱?这样的评价却一回回让我走向绝望(来自:www.hnnSCY.cOm 博文学习 网:高考书信作文范文)。难道我的生命里注定不该拥有曼妙的歌声?

我的追求有错吗?我的努力有错吗?我的拼搏有错吗?

蓝天百声哭

?年?月?日

(二)第二封

蓝天百声哭:

您好,收到您的来信,我的心情也不由得因为您而低沉了许多。那页薄薄的纸儿在我的书桌上沉寂了多日,可我的心灵却为此翻腾了许久。今天,在这样一个晴朗无云、风和日丽的日子里,我提笔给你回信。愿我的一叶飞鸿能驱散笼罩你心头的阴霾。

我亲爱的朋友,我想说,你的追求没有错!你的努力没有错!你的拼搏更没有错!你的错在于你没有找到自己的位臵,你没有把握好自己的实力,你没有认清自己的优势与劣势。

我亲爱的朋友,并不是所有的鸟儿都能歌唱,并不是所有的花儿都能结出硕果,并不是所有的幼苗都能成为参天大树,并不是所有的土壤都能适合作物生长,并不是所有的角色都适合你去扮演。画家固然令人向往,音乐家固然让人羡慕,可是,我的朋友,或许,这都不是属于你的职业。我知道,你有强健的体魄,你有顽强的毅力,你有敏锐的目光,你有冷静的头脑,所有这一切决定了你或许该成为一个军人、一个科学家、一个企业家。那才是你的位臵。我亲爱的朋友,请不要抱怨生活的不公,你看,那只乌鸦不再盲目地想做翱翔的老鹰,它知道它的聪明才智更应该去运用到怎样获取瓶底的泉水。瞧,它成功地做到了这一点,这才是聪明的乌鸦啊!

希望看到一个崭新的你!

沧海一声笑

?年?月?日

给老宅的一封信

老宅:

你好吗?还记得我吗?我是曾住在三单元四楼的那个爱笑爱跳的小丫头啊。我11岁的时候离开与我共伴多年的你,到现在已经8个年头啦!你不记得我了吗?是呀,也许你实在太老了,听妈妈说你都60多岁了。不过,没关系,嘻嘻,我还记得你。

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